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Hello Stranger

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:dummy: Me and my Buddhie Richard :P
Hes awesome :woohoo:

especially with a lollipop :D
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

To start, this is a huge improvement among your pixel works <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" /> It looks more like normal emotes now! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="19" alt=":la:" title="La la la la" />

Now let's start with the good things.

Your shading looks great, and I can tell that you're using gradients, but that's okay. Second, you did a great job on the size of the blue emote (who's top-hat is awesome <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l…" width="19" height="21" alt=":lmao:" title="Laughing my ass off!" />) and the size of the hands. Also, the facial features such as eyes and the mouths are looking good, and lastly, the sunglasses on the green emote look good too.

Now... The problems <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt=":noes:" title="Noes!" />

The size of the body of the green emote appears to be slightly smaller than the blue one, and they should both be the same (15x15). And you should loop it; i.e. have the blue one walk back into view after it gets thrown by the green one.

And that's it! Keep improving! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" />